Great concept!
I kinda like the white background, I feel like it pulls my eyes towards the center.
Also since he is jumping though a portal into "limbo", give me the feeling of someone going to a peaceful place in his mind to focus.
The darkness of the portal kinda gives the impression of blocking out all the darkness to become prepared for battle.
Maybe the small guy standing on his kokyū is what he really looks like and is right now about to engage in battle.
Most of that impression comes from the contrast for me.
Keep it up!
Thanks for the critique :), I struggle with backgrounds and just couldn't produce one that seemed to work at least at the moment, but either on this one or the next i'll push myself to get better at them!
against stark white it is a bit difficult to see the colors chosen. colors look toned down because of it. my two cents worth only...
Great concept!
I kinda like the white background, I feel like it pulls my eyes towards the center.
Also since he is jumping though a portal into "limbo", give me the feeling of someone going to a peaceful place in his mind to focus.
The darkness of the portal kinda gives the impression of blocking out all the darkness to become prepared for battle.
Maybe the small guy standing on his kokyū is what he really looks like and is right now about to engage in battle.
Most of that impression comes from the contrast for me.
Keep it up!
Thanks for the critique :), I struggle with backgrounds and just couldn't produce one that seemed to work at least at the moment, but either on this one or the next i'll push myself to get better at them!
against stark white it is a bit difficult
to see the colors chosen.
colors look toned down because of it.
my two cents worth only...