retopology critique and help

hey guys still am working on the retopology of the female character.
she should be useable for animation and posing so i try my best to do it correctly

  • spikeyxxx replied

    Hi Yuki, those blue lines are edges marked as sharp: (CTRL+E > Mark Sharp):

    I'm convinced that you do not want any sharp edges in your (organic) model (that is more for hard surface modelling..)

    To clear them, select all and CTRL+E (or go tot Edge menu) and 'Clear Sharp'.

    You might be able to reduce the topology a bit, but the general edge flow looks good to me (but I'm not an expert).

  • spikeyxxx replied

    BTW a small excerpt from a book by Haruki Murakami, 'Dans, dans, dans' (I only have a Dutch copy, but you can read that...):

  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    spikeyxxx thanks its fixed :D and i can perfectly read it since its my birthlanguage :D

    guess so far it means the topology is ok :)

  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    btw spikeyxxx i wonder, is there some meaning with the page ? sometimes i can be so slow xD

  • spikeyxxx replied

    Just because I tend to call you Yuki...this is where that comes from;)

  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    ow hehe true, and i do love snow its maybe cold but beautifull :D

  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    some update of the retopo of the face (somehow i wonder if the forehead is ok or wrong)

    if anything looks strange pls let me know

  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    some update .
    pls if anything is not good let me know :)


  • Shawn Blanch(blanchsb) replied

    Definitely taking shape now. I notice the verts stretch on the middle back side of the neck and almost make a slight bulge.  Other than that it is looking great.

  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    indeed now when i look again there is indeed a bulge :)
    gonna continue this weekend and hope to get further with the retopo :)

  • yukino hatake(yukinoh1989) replied

    some update . hope its still looking ok :)
    let me know when i made mistakes