Kaneda Motorcycle

This is an exercise submission on the exercise Texturing a Sci-Fi Motorcycle

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  • jadakiss

    Thanks everyone for your valuable feedback!

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    Jonathan Lampel (jlampel)

    This is awesome! Nicely done jjadakiss ! I agree with Adrian that I'd love to see those scratches in a few more places. The mirror like material for the hubcaps is pretty cool but I don't quite get carbon fiber from looking at it. It's a really tricky texture to make but there's a Shader Forge episode about it if you ever want to make a procedural version. I'd say the bump for the seat is also a bit strong as well, or if it's supposed to be soft then some SSS would really help. Excellent job with those stickers and keep up the good work!

  • Todd Sanderson (acapier)

    I like the decals, but they look too clustered and randomly placed, which breaks the flow of the design for me. I might've aligned one below the seat, and the 'Big#1' would fit nicely at the bottom of the wheel arm. Overall looks great, though. I love 'Akira'!

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    Adrian Bellworthy (adrian2301)

    Looks cool. The front wheel arm looks great , Maybe adding those scratches to the other areas would serve to break up the color and roughness a bit, the seat bump maybe a little strong, looks a little like a sponge rather than leather.

    More effort in hand painted would be nice but overall nice work. 

  • Matthew Fricker (frikkr)

    This looks really good ,well done! Personally I would have broken up the red a little more but that's just my personal opinion.