Melvin!

This is an exercise submission on the exercise Sculpting Melvin

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Exercises are a great way to test what you've learned given certain restraints, while getting feedback from your peers. Plus, they're a lot of fun!

  • Ninive Kha (ninivekha)

    This is a good start, keep at it.

  • David Soares (donsoarese)

    Don t give up too quick, push yourself!

    Common!

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    Kent Trammell (theluthier)

    Good work here eemialbaster. The essential shapes are defined to a recognizable degree but overall a little under-developed. For example the mouth has no rim (or lip) definition; it's more a smooth hole than a mouth.

    Also the pose isn't adjusted to work great from all angles. When I look at the sculpt from the side the pose feels flat with all limbs planar to one another. You want the sculpture to look right from the main camera angle but also look right from any angle.

    My last note is that the surface isn't as smooth / polished as it could be. It feels lumpy and pinched as a result.

    Still I think you've earned a pass from me. Keep these notes in mind for future sculpts!