Hot take two

This is an exercise submission on the exercise Melvin Lip Sync

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    Wayne Dixon (waylow)

    Great stuff!

    But - push the B pop bigger (closed to open I mean)
    Make the Y in You’re not bigger (push it more forward to show more change of shape here and lessen the top lip looking like it is moving by its lonesome)
    Also make the change of shape bigger on the B in Burn.

    Really great improvements!