Character Ball Exercise

This is an exercise submission on the exercise Character Ball

This submission has passed!

Exercises are a great way to test what you've learned given certain restraints, while getting feedback from your peers. Plus, they're a lot of fun!

  • crew
    Wayne Dixon (waylow)

    Great work Nielsen.

    It's all polish work from here. You're eye will continue to develop as you practice more so I will just point out a few areas that could be polished up. If you don't know how to fix the all now, don't worry you will soon enough.

    -check each jump to make sure you are stretching inline with the arc that he is traveling. Most of them are a little askew.
    -Also check to see if the amount of stretch matches the size of the jump. eg - 44 is a big stretch but then height of this jump as a little too low for that amount of push off (stretch)
    -f24ish, check the motion paths on the top control. Look for sharp changes of direction and see if you can smooth it out.
    -Same thing in the antic to the jumps around f70.

    Keep up the good work.