the brave ball

This is an exercise submission on the exercise Character Ball

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Exercises are a great way to test what you've learned given certain restraints, while getting feedback from your peers. Plus, they're a lot of fun!

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    Wayne Dixon (waylow)

    Really good Noam!

    There's just a few areas that you could improve on your timing and spacing. It will be hard to see right now, but keep doing what your doing and in a few weeks it will become super obvious.
    So I'll just mention some general areas, and then I'm sure you will know how to make it look better shortly.

    -Look for any spots in the take offs where it feels like it sticks and then pops.
    -Check that the stretching is in-line with the path of action.
    -be consistent with the amount the ball penetrates into the ground. (watch the end of the platform - you can translate it up a little when he leans over)
    -Then image this animation if certain beats were just a little bit faster. (not all beats, just some)

    This is all fuel to think about after moving on and coming back in a week or 2.
    It should make more sense to your eyes then.

    Excellent job - keep it up.

  • Mark Smith (me1958424)

    exercise accomplished...
    looks like the ball is thinking...
    good work.