Clay render of a rifle I’m working on.

Thoughts, feedback, criticisms?

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4 Responses to “Futuristic Rifle”
  1. craig
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    Needs a gunsight at the end of barrel, should be as high and line up with, the top of rifle above the trigger. Unless it’s a ray gun or blaster.

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    May 6, 2012 at 6:03 am
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      Eventually I’m going to put a scope of some sort on it. It’s supposed to be more of a long ranged weapon, so a gun sight wouldn’t be of much help. But thank you for the feedback anyways!

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      May 6, 2012 at 9:10 pm
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    Hi! I think it looks like a good start. But I think it looks un ergonomic. The pistol grip looks to far back and to smal, the handle on top has no place for the hand if you like to carry it and there is no place to put your left hand under the barrel. Think about the balance, a good balanced rifle makes targeting easier :-)
    Good luck!

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    May 6, 2012 at 6:18 am
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      The grip does look a little bit disproportionate now that you mention it, I’ll see if I can fix that. I’m going to put some kind of bi-pod on it as it’s more of a stationary long ranged rifle than something that gets carried around everywhere. But I’ll play around with the idea of adding a handle for carrying it. Thank you for the feedback!

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      May 6, 2012 at 9:19 pm

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